revuse my essay per the instructor fredback

I failed this essay. Please look at the comments from the instructor I attached as well as the original guidelines for the paper. Make MAJOR revisions based on his feedback.

DO NOT SEND ME BACK A PAPER WITH VERY FEW CHANGES MADE. This paper needs a major oberhaul

 

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